March 6, 2022 Salty Air Publishing Newsletter

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In this issue:
Fork in the Road
Write Away - Elizabeth George
Honoring Grandpa
Readmore Bookstore
Benjamin Bunny & the Rabbit Hole
PHR Books
PHR Work In-Progress
 
Fork in the Road
There comes a point in the life of a fictional character when the author pushes him or her to a choice. In thriller fiction, that junction in the road is not as benign as Robert Frost’s “I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.” One choice may bother the character's conscience. The other choice
may cause the loss of everything he or she holds dear in life—including life itself. Much easier to do in fiction than in fact. Stay and fight or turn away and justify that decision for the rest of your life. Most of us do everything we can to protect ourselves from having to make that decision. No matter what, it is a lot easier to create that fork in the road in fiction than it is in real life. It is, in fact, the obligation of the thriller fiction author to push the character to that fork in the road. To make the story feel real, the author has to embody that conflict.
 
The thing is, in fiction, the author can always stretch for a happy ending.

Stay well,


Paul@paulhraymer.com
Write Away - Elizabeth George
Learning to write is an extended process. At one point, early in the process, you recognize that you can put symbols (letters) on paper that reflect what you are thinking or saying. What seems to be very simple now, was difficult at the beginning.

And that’s just the start. When we get past the, “See Jane run” lines, we get into much more complex things. At some point, the beauty of the words working together creates an image that you can finally say, “That’s pretty good!” I remember an old Peanuts cartoon when Snoopy has a dictionary, and he says, “Now I have all the words. I just have to put them together.”

Elizabeth George is an excellent writer of fiction, and like many excellent writers she tries to pass her knowledge of the craft along to others. That’s what she did in Write Away. By the time I found this book I had already self-published a novel, Recalculating Truth. I thought it was pretty good, but I knew I had more to learn.

Like all writers, George has a specific process that works for her. (She has written 21 Inspector Lynley novels now.) Her stories are set in England but she lives in Seattle, Washington. She spends a great deal of time surveying the sites of each book, and she describes and illustrates that process in Write Away. In fact, she moves through the entire process of book creation from the Overview, through the Basics, the Technique, the Process, and finally examples.

The primary idea that I extracted from this is right from the title of her first chapter: Story is Character. That’s the kind of book I want to write. People have characters and those characters interact to make the story. In Chapter 19 she includes a Character Prompt Sheet that I have pulled into the writing software I use, Scrivener, which helps me to define the characters in the story. This includes their age, height, weight, build, but also enemies, best friend, ambition in life, political leaning, and hobbies. It also includes a pathological maneuver - what would the character do under stress? When the character is at the fork in the road, they perform some sort of personal ritual like tucking hair behind an ear, straightening out their glasses, twisting their body away.

I found this book very helpful in fundamental ways of helping me to develop my own process. George includes excerpts from her “Journal of a Novel” that reflects her nervousness and fear in the process. I found this book more useful than her second book on writing, Mastering the Process, which seemed padded with her book excerpts and more personally related information.

I would definitely recommend Write Away, however, as a great starting point.
Honoring Grandpa
Guest column - Kate Raymer

   My grandfather, my mother’s dad, was Ukrainian and Polish. I wish I’d listened more carefully to anything he shared about growing up in a home of this heritage. His parents were the ones who immigrated to the US for a better life, but I don’t know a lot of those details. I do remember my grandfather as one of the kindest people I knew. He always had warm, wonderful hugs and was a skilled cook. His golumpkis were simply amazing!

About 22 years ago, we hosted an exchange student from Peru for a year. Through Luis, we met teenagers from around the world who were staying on Cape Cod. One young man, Pasha, was from Ukraine. Over the years, we have stayed in contact with Luis, and recent events have reconnected us with Pasha. Luis now lives in Romania and is directly impacted through his wife’s family with people fleeing Ukraine. Pasha lives in the US and is constantly affected by his family and friends living in Ukraine.

Through both of these young men, we have been getting heartbreaking stories of women and children having to leave their husbands behind to fight for their country. Or the heroic efforts of those staying behind and living underground so they can assist with defense and offer aid in any way possible. The work that Luis, Pasha and others can accomplish to ease fear and provide comfort when all seems helpless is beyond kindness.

They have provided us with four organizations that they know are doing this incredible work and we want to share them with you:
1. Razom for Ukraine. First aid and trauma supplies. https://razomforukraine.org/the-first-urgent-shipment/. This organization has been able to do the impossible. Between Feb 24 and Feb 27 they raised money, bought medical kits, set up a green corridor USA -> Poland -> Ukraine, and airlifted the first shipment of emergency supplies.
2. Sunflower of Peace: Emergency medical kits https://www.sunflowerofpeace.com/

3. Voices of Children: Psychological help for children with war trauma. https://voices.org.ua/en/
4. UNHCR. UN Refugee support. https://donate.unhcr.org/int/en/ukraine-emergency

There are many more organizations that are out there to help with this crisis. We hope you’ll find a way to support these people in any way you can. I hope no one will be robbed of having a loved one, like my grandfather, to pass along a culture that is strong and loving and can bring lasting, loving memories that will pass through the DNA.

 
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Readmore Bookstore
Readmore Bookstore located in Taunton MA, has been serving the greater Taunton community since 1975. Our selection of thousands and thousands of titles nestled into 3500 square feet of retail space offers the area's largest and most diverse selection of reading material for all ages.
The Readmore Bookstore strongly supports local authors!

Readmore Books
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Telephone: (508) 822-3074

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Benjamin Bunny & The Rabbit Hole
 
Maine Crime Writers These folks send out well written posts regularly. Not quite sure what the frequency is but they are quite short and fun to read. Friday's post was entitled Cabin Fever, Supply Chain Woes and The ASS The writing in these little blurbs is excellent.
Calendly - There are so many on-line meetings these days that having a tool than checks on availability is a necessity. Most of the time I seem to be confronted with Doodle Polls, but there are others like Mixmax, Calendly, Koalender, and Vyte. Recently I have experienced people being confused regarding setting up a Doodle Poll. I'll let you know what I find out. I would love to hear your opinions.
PHR Books
Residential Ventilation Handbook V2
Recalculating Truth
Death at the Edge of the Diamond
Also available on-line and in fine bookshops.
PHR Work In-Progress
The new novel - Second Law - Oh, boy! Second Law has a new cover. I'll reveal it in the next issue of this newsletter. It is out for the early reviewer scrutiny. And then it will be ready for PRIME TIME!
Click for the March Madness - Mystery Giveaway!
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